Though I find it hard to critique a business letter, I feel that each of these examples looks and sounds professional, mainly because the alignment is great. They all follow a pattern to of introduction, the body of your letter, followed by a conclusion of some sort. What did interest me was the tone in each letter and how different they were, especially between the second and third. The second seemed very professional and rather curt, while the third talked about passion with a more persuasive tone.
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Though I find it hard to critique a business letter, I feel that each of these examples looks and sounds professional, mainly because the alignment is great. They all follow a pattern to of introduction, the body of your letter, followed by a conclusion of some sort. What did interest me was the tone in each letter and how different they were, especially between the second and third. The second seemed very professional and rather curt, while the third talked about passion with a more persuasive tone.
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